
“How miserable is this weather,” Raul moaned.
“Oh no,” April said. “This is the perfect day to stay in and… I don’t know, write some poems.”
“Poems? No thanks. Never been able to figure them out.”
“That’s because you never really tried.”
Raul slumped down in the couch cushions. “Did too. The words just don’t fit together.”
“You’re overthinking. How’s this:
"The rain today, Is here to stay, Time to write, Since I can"t go play...
“Ugh! Maybe you’re right. That’s no good”
“No, I liked it.” Raul sat up and stared into the rain. “Lemme try… Okay, here goes…”
WC: 100
I, like Raul, am not very good with poems. (as you can probably tell from my story) I used to try them out a bit more often than I do now, and lately I’ve been having thoughts of trying again. Be afraid! Be very afraid!
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My relationship with poetry is pretty much the same. Every now and then I get the itch.
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It can be a tough itch to scratch too!
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Raul is embarked on a journey that may see him take 10 years to make it back home
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Or more…
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I’m terrible with poems, but I agree that one upside to bad weather (we have snow storms at the moment) is being trapped inside and having the time to get some writing done! Good take Russell.
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Thanks Iain! Making the best of the bad weather is the way to go.
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I feel ya, Russell… I don’t know what has come over me as I’ve been attempting poetry lately… some of it apparently is not too bad – even when I am unsure… So g’head! Let your creativity go!
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It’s fun to play with the words sometimes to see if I can make something resembling a poem, but the urge does come and go. Good luck with your poems Dale!
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Thanks, Russell
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Raul and I like the same kind of poetry – rhyme and meter. 😀
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Thanks Oneta! Nothing wrong with that!
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Dear Russell,
I’m not a big poetry writer, but when I do write it, it’s free verse. Got no time to rhyme. 😉 Love the dialogue. What else do you do on a rainy day?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’ve tried a bit of free verse too, but I normally end up making bad rhymes, lol. But hey, if it’s nasty, bad rhymes are okay, right?
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Two sites that you can use that are very useful to a poet — yes, you’re a poet, anyone who writes from the heart is — are rhymezone and shadowpoetry.com I look forward to seeing what you come up with.
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Thanks! I’ll be sure to check those out.
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You’re welcome!
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Poetry is not for me, too many rules and regulations! Having said that, I do dive in now and again, but I publish them on a separate blog to keep them out of the way!
Here’s mine!
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I’ll have to get over there and check those out Keith. You’re right about all the rules and stuff, but for the most part I’ve always just wrote what felt right. Probably doesn’t make for good poetry, but I never claimed to be any good! Thanks for stopping by!
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“More people write poetry than read it.” – George Carlin
I’ve never been a fan of poetry. I’ve more written more than my fair share. I like writing poetry more than I like reading it. I like the challenge of coming up with rhymes and patterns.
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I feel ya! I too don’t read too much of it. I’ve got a Robert Frost book (how cliche is that?) but I’ve never made it all the way through. There is something to the challenge of coming up with a good rhyme ever now and then though!
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Even when my goal is to write a serious poem, it always ends up being silly. Maybe funny. Just not my genre, although I do enjoy reading what others have written.
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I’ve read some good ones, they just weren’t my own!
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🙂
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Well done you for trying the poetry, keep at it something will come out of nowhere when you’re least expecting it
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Thanks Michael! I give it a go from time to time, hoping to make some improvements. Maybe they’ll come eventually.
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