
Thin wisps of smoke climb from the trembling tip of Henry’s cigarette, up and up through fading shafts of evening light. He watches them go and dreams of joining them, lazily curling up, wafting away, free on the constant breeze that flows through the old building, making it the perfect place to fix.
Henry watched it go, visualized his own journey, drifting free among the clouds and picked up his belt. His hand steadied the moment he bit down on leather, the vein stood out, and he plucked up the needle. It was time to make his dreams come true.
WC: 100
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The descriptions here are great.
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Thanks Lisa!
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First class story.
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Thanks so much!
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You are welcome.
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Great descriptive mood writing
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Thanks Neil!
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That made me want to reach inside the story and smack the needle out of his hand. What a truly sad ending.
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It truly is.
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Holy crow, that was good, Russel! Those descriptions had me picturing all sorts of dreams.
And then “pouf”! Gone.
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Thanks so much Dale!
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