The Johnson’s checked out early Sunday morning to return home in preparation for the week ahead.
“What a weekend,” Ronny yawned to his wife as he unlocked the door and swung it open. The stench hit them full in the face.

“What the…,” Fran exclaimed peering over Ronny’s shoulder. She couldn’t believe her eyes as Lil Ron lay passed out on the couch amid a mess of bottles, overflowing ash trays, and was that vomit on her new carpet!
Ronny took it all in before stomping over to his son. “Wake up boy,” he shook him roughly, “The party’s over.”
WC: 100
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Lil Ron is in a whole load of trouble!
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Indeed!
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Uh oh, Lil Ron is going to regret his partying! Nicely written.
Susan A Eames at
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Thanks Susan! I’m afraid you’re right.
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Aah, youth. Sigh!
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Some party with flowing alcohol and burning cigarette. Nice plot.
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Thanks!
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Reminds me of a party I went to… the parents came home early.. Took one look, told their son, return our house to normal before our return and went to stay in a hotel!
Party was indeed over at that point…
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I bet, and cleaning while in such a state would be brutal!
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Hope he made him clean up the mess too!
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And maybe even cut the grass for good measure!
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He’s in trouble now!!
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You better believe it!
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Dear Russell,
Li’l Ronny has some ‘splainin’ to do. Party’s definitely over. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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He does indeed! He’s some sort of magical wordsmith if he can ‘splain his way out of this one though!
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I think Lil Ronnie is waking up to a nightmare. I hope.
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Oh, I think you are so very right!
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Really well put together.
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Thanks Lisa! Glad you liked it!
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