
Lon tripped, flew through the air, and skid to a halt, asphalt tore into palms, elbows, and knees.
Pushing himself painfully to his feet, he raised his eyes to the massive structure dominating the night sky. The Tower. Too late he realized as the Tower began to glow.
Once charged, his world would be gone. Blasted to dust. So many lives lost. Just like that, and there was nothing to do. Too late to save his world. Not too late to make them pay.
Blood streaked his arms, tears his cheeks as he ran to the Tower.
They will pay.
WC: 100
Seeing this picture sent my mind to the Death Star for some reason. I’m not sure why, but I suppose the lights of different colors atop the building made me think of a weapon charging to its full destructive power.
Anyway, hope you like it. Thanks for reading!
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While I admire his sentiment, I’m not sure what he can do single-handedly against such powerful beings.
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True. But, under such stressful circumstances, we often act without much thought.
On the the other hand, perhaps there is something that he knows that we do not.
It’s hard to say.
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I saw the same, some sort of weapon ready to fire into the night sky. My story was equally apocalyptic too. Nice one.
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Thanks Iain. When writing mine, I was thinking I may be the only one going in that direction.
How wrong I was.
Glad you liked it!
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Great minds think alike Russell 🙂
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I’ll go with that!
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I could feel that scrape… ouch.
Sad that he couldn’t reach whatever to stop it.
Well done, sir!
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Thanks much Dale! I think the scrape was my favorite part.
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It was so very well described…
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Strong emotion, strong hero. I hope he gets to “them,” whoever they are, before they can escape.
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Thanks! I hope so too.
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You achieve great pace in your story. I felt that scrape from the asphalt!
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Thanks Penny! Glad you liked it.
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Very tense and exciting. I’m confident he’ll know how to make them pay.
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Thanks!
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Not sure what he’s up to but it doesn’t bode well for his enemies.
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Thanks Liz! I feel like he’s got some bad things planned.
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Well done on ratcheting up the tension in this story. I hope Lon can make a difference, but I suspect not.
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Well, you never can tell. Sometimes, one man on a mission can make a difference. Sometimes not.
Thanks Susan!
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Very emotive. Great main character.
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Thanks Lisa!
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I hope he can save himself but I think he is doomed. Great drama.
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Things don’t look too good, but maybe they’ll work out.
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I think if it’s all were so close to an end there is no other choice than to try
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Thanks Bjorn! There’s no sense in just giving up. May as well go for it!
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